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FFM 2017 -Day 31- (Final) Making History

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Collecting the bones of a long dead dragon is not an easy task, especially in this economy.  But by calling in a few favors, I was able to procure them.  Thankfully, one of those favors knew a lot about draconic anatomy; otherwise, I would have never been able to properly put the skeleton back together.  Outfitting the skeleton with cybernetics was simple enough.  And cheaper.  All that was left now was to put in the finishing touch.

I walked over to my desk and opened the chest on it.  Inside, the very thing that would bring my creation to life: a heartstone.  My left arm sparked and twitched a bit upon seeing the stone, as that arm was powered by a small sliver of a different stone.  If only a fraction of a heartstone could power a cybernetic arm for a lifetime, it only made sense that an entire stone could power a whole skeleton.  Of course, this experiment would be the first time that such a feat would be attempted.  A heartstone was a crystallized soul, after all.  I may very well raise this dragon from the grave.

But I wasn't going to turn away from this.  Magiology has made great strides in the past few decades: I wasn't going to pass up the chance to become the first person to create a cyber-organic golem.

I carefully inserted the heartstone into the slot in the skeleton's ribcage.  Stepping back, I recited the incantation to activate the stone, allowing it to give its power to my creation.  The lambent stone shone even brighter than ever and veins of light spread through the metal and bone.  The eye sockets in the skull began to flicker with a pale blue light as the rest of the skeleton began to rattle.  Its claws cracked, its tail twitched, and its head jerked to the side.  Soon enough, the cyberized skeleton moved fluidly, testing its joints and balancing itself.

Its glowing eyes stared at me and I stared right back.  For a moment, I thought I had done something wrong, but all of my fears washed away when the skeletal golem sat on its haunches, waiting for my command.

"I have done it," I said with a sigh.  My hypothesis was correct.  I had finally made history.  I had succeeded.
FFM Links - 31 July 2017

CHALLENGE: Campfire Tales

At last, July draws to a close. The road has been long, but finally, the end is almost within reach. Take a moment to reflect on how far you've come, both as a flasher and as a writer, and then pull up a seat beside the campfire to swap war stories with your fellow Flash Fiction Month survivors. It will be a whole year before you see one another again.

Your final FFM 2017 challenge is thus:

 Bullet; Green Step 1: Post a comment below saying "Challenge me".

 Bullet; Blue Step 2: Reply to someone else's challenge request with a challenge that includes the following 3 components. Keep in mind that you can reply to multiple people, even if a challenge has already been set. Indeed, the more the merrier! It's a community challenge, so supporting others through prompting is essential! :eager: by darkmoon3636

  1. one TECHNICAL element (e.g. wordcount, form, narrative technique, etc)
  2. one NARRATIVE element (e.g. genrecharacter typeliterary device, theme, etc)
  3. one DEALERS CHOICE element (e.g. whatever you want, however you want it!)
Want to suggest more than 3 challenge elements? Go for it! So long as you include the basic 3 components, you can add as many additional elements as you'd like (within reason ;) (Wink)). Not sure if your element is Technical or Narrative in nature? If you think it fits there, then you're probably right. Don't overthink it!

 Bullet; Purple Step 3: Complete one of the challenge suggestions that was given to you on your initial "Challenge Me" comment, and post the result in a new comment below. Bonus points if you end up doing more than one. 

Complete all three steps, and your 2017 Flash Fiction Month will draw to a victorious close. VIVA!

Challenge by: doodlerTM
Bullet; Blue Word count must be a multiple of 7 [7, 14, 21, etc etc]
Bullet; Blue must be of the science fantasy genre
Bullet; Blue must include a skeleton

They never said what kind of skeleton it was supposed to be.  Also, the word count is 385 (55x7=385).
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WindySilver's avatar
Wow! What a fantastic take on the cahllenge you got! :D I'm not sure if giving a dragon sceleton life is a good idea though; it could easily get out of control and wreak havoc.